Indiscreet, incomplete or incomprehensible: email catastrophes are common place. The couple of lines you dashed off to someone, almost without thinking, return to haunt you.

  • But given that it is such an integral part of both small talk and big business, how can you ensure your email writing is on message?
  • Include a subject heading – effective subjects serve two purposes. Firstly, they give readers a reason to open the message, something that can prove invaluable in a congested inbox. Secondly, they are incredibly useful when you look to find a mail at a later date. Blank subjects, or “Re: Your message”, simply don’t help.
  • Think about your tone – emails are widely accepted as being less formal than printed letters. That means that a number of niceties can be omitted. Nonetheless, it’s vital that you remain professional. Perhaps the best guideline is to think about the tone you would set if you were speaking to the person in an interview conversation. Once you know the person, you can moderate your tone to reflect the relationship you have with them.
  • Include a powerful opening paragraph. Because emails are so often skim read (particularly with the deluge of spam around), you need to grab your audience here as much as with any other audience. Tell them up front in the subject. Then tell them what you're going to tell them in the first paragraph. Then tell it to them.
  • Use structural devices such as bullet points, subheadings and frequent paragraph breaks to ensure your message is easily scanned – particularly in longer emails.
  • Remember that email is recorded and anything written down has greater strength than if said in passing. It can even be admissible in court! So don’t write anything that you wouldn’t be happy to have recalled at a later date, or to have forwarded to someone else.
  • Don’t press the send button until you’ve read your message through. Nothing is more certain to create misunderstanding or embarrassment than a typo here or there.

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